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©2006-2009 ~KaidoDraco
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"Junoa?"
"Yes?"
"Nothing." Junoa smiled shyly. The music from the camp echoed through the still air. She nudged Kaido's shoulder playfully.
"Let's dance."
"I'm not a dancer, specially with my wings."
"I'm sure you are.... Be nice."
"I'll try."

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DONE *dies*

G'aaah! this has taken so long! And I still think it needs working on! My biggest weakness, worse than anatomy; backgrounds....

Ahh, well, least I actually have a picture of Kaido that isn't COMPLETELY crap. And with his nice, shiny dragon stone. And Junoa. Methinks the wings are well-placed.

Kaido, Junoa and logos are © me, , got it?

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:iconcolonel-strawberry:
Awww :3
thats so cute!
Awesome poses and colors, too!
:iconmissushow:
Beautiful!

Do you want crits? I can give you crits, but if you don't want them (cause you worked so hard on it, you know.))

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Anything written like this: -This too, will pass.- or
-blahblah.- should be concidered a big compliment. It's a little tidbit on what your art made me think. Part of a story that exists no where but in your art.

-The World Is Quiet Here-
-Fire!-
-Ve
:iconkaidodraco:
Nah, I don't mind. Do your worst!

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May Bahamut guide our souls.... Like anything else will!

"You've got to be the best, you've got to change the world, And use this chance to be heard! Your time is NOW!"-Muse, Rock Gods!

"Another wave of tension, under a sky of dust."-Linkin Park!:)
:iconkaidodraco:
Cheers!

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May Bahamut guide our souls.... Like anything else will!

"You've got to be the best, you've got to change the world, And use this chance to be heard! Your time is NOW!"-Muse, Rock Gods!

"Another wave of tension, under a sky of dust."-Linkin Park!:)
:iconmissushow:
Right then. My worst? You'd never be prepared. I'll just give you my crits and be off.

Allright, it seems you need to work on feet and hands and their shape. Practice, and look at other peoples dragons sketches, the feet and hands are a huge issue for me too, but it makes a picture look a heck of a lot better when they're done correctly.

The background is a bit flat, we need a bit more life than those flashing things, and the colors don't go that well with your dragons...it makes teh whole picture be kind of dark, and you've half lost the black dragon. I'm not sure what that blue stuff is in the back...I've a feeling you kind of skimped on the background ;p but that's ok for now I suppose. The thing I am getting annoyed at is that black line. What on earth is it? :0 I've no idea.

A bit more muscle deffinition and shading would be nice as well. Try not to make your dragons look so flat, because they do look flat. The shading you have is nicely places, but think of it as many many layers of color until you DO get to that part...sort of like gradually.

Well that's all...for now. *evil laughter* Great job though, I'm loving the dragon romance.

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Anything written like this: -This too, will pass.- or
-blahblah.- should be concidered a big compliment. It's a little tidbit on what your art made me think. Part of a story that exists no where but in your art.

-The World Is Quiet Here-
-Fire!-
-Ve
:iconkaidodraco:
Yep. You've been very honest and I can see where your crits come from.

I'm going to try a new technique soon for my dragons and humans, so I might be able to get a bit more from them.

Cheers, How! :ahoy:

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May Bahamut guide our souls.... Like anything else will!

"You've got to be the best, you've got to change the world, And use this chance to be heard! Your time is NOW!"-Muse, Rock Gods!

"Another wave of tension, under a sky of dust."-Linkin Park!:)
:iconmissushow:
Same to you Kaido!

--
Anything written like this: -This too, will pass.- or
-blahblah.- should be concidered a big compliment. It's a little tidbit on what your art made me think. Part of a story that exists no where but in your art.

-The World Is Quiet Here-
-Fire!-
-Ve
:iconartistkissell:
AWW!!! That's so cute!
I love their coloring too ^.^ and the background... i like it all!

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Are you Kylee-Black's fro buddy? I think NOT!
:D

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